Snoink

So, you may not know this but Nate , our admin for YWS, is a champion ice skater. Because of his skills, he decided to try out for the winter ...

Clever! I quite liked this. :) A star for you! The main problem is that the words don't run together smoothly. It's a little hard to describe, so just read ...

Hey wati! I know that you said not to shatter this, so I'm not going point by point on this, but I would like to point out some things that ...

Hey Ego! I've seen you critiquing on YWS, so I figured I would drop by! :D I didn't like the first two stanzas at all. They were really boring. It's ...

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I could hardly breathe because he was chocking me with my own clothes.

Hehe! What a twisted story! I like it. What is this a fanfiction of? :) Anyway, I have one grammatical comment, but it should be easy, so no worries! Whenever ...

Hey emoticon! Welcome to YWS! :D There is a difference between poetry and brain dumps! Brain dumps belong to journals or blogs... places that are personal and not up for ...

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Okay, so this is the nit-picky review! The better review, full of lovely commentary on the actual story, is on TWS (since we need to get that place up and ...