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Thanks, Nate, for all your help!

It all started when our protagonist, the freak, woke up in a moor. It was the second time it had happened. Feeling overwhelmingly relieved, the freak punched a butterknife, thinking ...

Hey Words! Okay, this is going to be a really general review, so yay? For the first two stanzas, you have a really hopeful tone that makes it sound like ...

Eek! I really liked this for the most part. It reminded me of William Carlos Williams's "Red Wheelbarrow", which is always a good thing! My main problem was it wasn't ...

Okay! Winston is awesome, but the dog looks really weird to me. I may be biased because I have a german shepherd at home, but here we go! The lower ...

Um. Okay. So, speaking as a biochemical engineering student who has researched this topic for a research paper, as of today, designer children are almost impossible to produce. There's no ...

GO TOHRU. YOU'RE AWESOME.

Hey Sachi! So yeah... you have a nice, clean style which is always a pleasure to read! However, a couple of rather major things irked me about this piece, so ...

Oh gosh... paper. I just spent all day cleaning out the paper in my room, and it's still not gone! It's terrible. It's especially pathetic because if I want to ...

Welcome back to YWS! :D

Yay! You got to love those dancing elephants! They're like... the best part of the site. Nah, just kidding. The best part about the site is the community and the ...

Yay! People who write since they were six or eight generally are awesome writers, and I'm sure you're no exception. It'll be nice to read your work! :) What sort ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! :D So you're one of those creative people, huh? ;) That's really cool! I wish I had ten ideas buzzing about in my mind constantly. Sadly, ...

Hmmm... interesting story! :) It's really hard to see which one you should do without both the third and first person excerpts! However, as somebody who had to rewrite an ...