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Hey Commas! It's really late, so I should probably go to bed, but I figured I would comment on your poem first! To start, stylistically, it's really stop-and-go. You flit ...

Okay, this is just going to be a quick review, but here we go! The main thing I thought was a little weird was that you kept saying you would ...

Jean Luc Picard.

Ohmigosh! This poem made me squeamish, lol. Needles, in general, suck. Like... oh gosh. I have to spend half my time holding my eyes when watching House. It's really pathetic. ...

WoW is evil. Beware. Agreed. Plus, it costs money. Sanctum is much cooler. XD

Give it to me because I love you! Or... um... can use those points to take over the world!

Yep... it was totally smaur's fault... >.> I didn't even notice it, lol.

Okay, so generally I don't like to comment on style, however... you could probably combine some sentences and make this piece a lot more smoother and easier to read. Right ...

First! He's holding a rock that transforms into a gun? What?! Doesn't make sense! Second, it seemed rather strange. You have this really intense conflict where there is creepy guy ...

Fire needs a catalyst for it to work though, which makes it heavier than air automatically!

A hole But... that doesn't make sense! Seeing as you would have to make a hole in the barrel, you would first have to make it empty. Then, more then ...

Photons of the visible light spectrum!

Thanks Nate ! :D

No. Now, if he said another body part would grow longer...

So... um... I'm confused. From what I've heard in college, some people don't like cigarettes at all, but they do like weed. So... why exactly would the friend want to ...