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Typos! Instead of "boarderline" it's actually "borderline." Okay! Now the story! It seemed really... flat. We really didn't know about any of the characters or what their relationship was with ...

Hello anima! Welcome to YWS. :) When I read poetry, I tend to look for something that just intoxicates me with beauty, especially with something about autumn, which is a ...

Dun dun dunnnn! Dramatic cliffhanger! I fail to see how this is a romance story, but knowing how crazy Greek mythology can be, it's bound to come up! The black ...

Haha, for me, I used to do Animaniacs/Tiny Toons/Looney Tunes fanfics. Amazing stuff, lol. I also made lots of stories with pigs and horses. And there was that story with ...

Hello, sspgcc1! Welcome to YWS! :D First, a typo! "The servants, brining in food"

Now, if this did make sense, it would be soooo awesome. ;) One thing that I don't understand is the last line, "And all because green trees leap." The lines ...

Hi Elinor! First of all, you keep on changing tense. You slip in and out of past and present tense, and it makes it really strange! So fix that up! ...

Hello Vivela! :D First things first, why do you capitalize the last word of every line? It's really distracting and it seems unnecessary! Okay, now for the poem itself! I ...

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Eek, no, I'm not sure if this would be better off as a poem! :) Stories (or poetry, for that matter!) should always have a purpose or sense of direction. ...

Instead of saying "Faulk," consider: "Faulking tap dancing elephants in pink tutus of the nth dimensional portal coming out to kill us why why why!" Good luck with nanowrimo! :D

Hey, cool it guys! ;) Anyway, as far as your poem... I was a bit confused by the reference of "Ithaka." To me, your epigraph seemed out of place and ...

And we neeeeeeeed more people with those stars, so don't be afraid to make the 1250 (or whatever) critiques it takes! It'll be awesome!

Thanks. I wrote it for class. (I didn't want to put the words "Gay-Discrimination" in it, as it was read out loud.) That makes it even more worse! How can ...

This may sound surprising, but each of these questions can be a complete basis for a new poem. Awesome, no? ;) It's great that you are asking all these questions ...