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I was wondering when you would post this! Just a couple of comments before the actual critique: -> Try not to use the passive voice. When you say, "my fingers ...

Generally, poetry is written to dig further into a subject rather than to gloss over it. ;) A cliche that comes to mind is, "Write what you know." As you ...

There should be an "Inside the Mod Forum" section. Which includes the discussions we've had about zombifying all our members.

This is more of a summary of the conflict rather than the story. Or maybe it's a prologue... I can't tell. Flesh it out and make it sparkle. It'll be ...

Okay! So I've listened to this a little too much, and I still adore this album. However! I've changed my mind on one of the songs. "Quiet As a Mouse" ...

Hey Rosey! I heard a lot about this piece, so I figured I would drop by and comment. :P First of all, flash fiction is just that... you are supposed ...

LOL! I thought about putting in your suggestion, but that's something I used to do... I've stopped doing that, just because it kind of stalls the action and I end ...

How do I keep from infodumping? My main character is telling some minor characters some background information, and I don’t know how to break it up. This information is necessary ...

Calm down, everyone. I think the reference to the website was just a joke, so you shouldn't take it too seriously. :)

I don't get the point of majoring in English to be a writer. If you want to write, write--there's no need to pay thousands of dollars a year for classes. ...

YAY! YWS represents, yo!

Actually, it reminds me of The Wall in Washington D.C. There's a traveling one and it came to our town once. I remember when Mom went to look at it, ...

Join my usergroup for character development! :D No, seriously, don't worry too much about it! You're probably just doing the first draft. Write the thing first (no, seriously, just write!) ...

Why is everybody talking in spoilers?

How to defeat the plot bunnies? That aught to get them thinking.... LOL. Be more specific! What particular elements of plot are you struggling with? I.E. do your plot bunnies ...