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Eek, penguin poem! *attacks* The main thing is that the two ideas don't really connect well yet. The transition doesn't seem to be there between the pie and her memories ...

Well. I'd have to say that was rather... pointless. Why would anyone put a website up on twitter? It's an annoying site I say. What next, Facebook? Get with the ...

I can already see members staying up Friday night, waiting for the clock to strike midnight so they can get into chat. God... I can't even begin with how pathetic ...

One thing I noticed was the fact that she's awake this whole time. You throw in a line about how the anesthetic isn't allowed, but why not? I should think ...

I'll bite! Give me the points because... um... I am awesome? (Not.)

Come on... it was for his kid in the stroller! You have to have balls in order to have a daughter!

The winter came in cold today-- it slunk past the forest, frost hanging from its breath, and tore off all the red with pointed teeth. Naked, the trees cried out ...

Dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn! See the sequel in the literary forums!

Well, Nate, obviously the answer is to pay us. I demand a 42% raise from my current salary, plus a moving bonus so I can be closer to the office. ...

Except for the fact that the new server conveniently kills YWS for about ten minutes near midnight when I should, ideally, be in bed. :P

Yay for SPEW! Too bad it doesn't exist...

I would personally weep emo tears of pain and sadness and write bad poetry to commemorate the passing of this historical icon. Or, y'know, do homework instead. :P

Actually, Grif, a video with better quality can be found here:

I want something dark, yet sets the style of the universe my novel has. What sort of style does your universe have? :)

If I saw this beginning, I would put it down and not want to read it. It's simply too confusing and doesn't have enough conflict in it. It's like, you ...