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So for now, think of your points as a reward for reviewing. And start accumulating them because in a month or so, you'll be glad you did so. :O

lol is right. *Moved to Randomness*

Hahaha, yes. In general, it's a bad thing to have to explain a story to somebody. :P It totally ruins the punchline. And, it's not the idea really, just the ...

It kind of looks like you're saying the same thing over and over again, which isn't that good. And I think it's because you want to say so much, but ...

Hello, lilylynn, and welcome to YWS! :D The biggest thing I can see with this poem is that it's not really... aesthetically pleasing. That is, the quotes and the capitalization ...

Hello Addawen! :D First of all, when I read stories, I want to be sucked into the action at once. And that's mostly because I love to be grabbed and ...

Haha, that was cute! Ideas for chapter two... maybe you could make other people find out about the rocket? That way, it gets a little more complicated. First, maybe his ...

You probably are dying from the critiques. After all, this is a bit of an old story! However, I wanted to point out two things: 1) Saying, "This story is ...

I didn't really find it that horror-inducing simply because it didn't follow through. Call me an old fogie, but it seems like that wasn't actually the main conflict. If anything, ...

Hey alurie! You have a nice, smooth style, which is good! The next step is making this story an enticing story that the reader can sink his teeth in! Now, ...

Oh gosh... 6/10, but only because that overplayed Creed song is on there. 1. Dinner Bells - Wolf Parade 2. The Chimbley Sweep - The Decemberists 3. Trouble Man - ...

Haha, awesome! Though you need to redo your FAQ page. :P

Okay, this may be because I'm a young adult (as opposed to being a teenager) but I thought this prologue was boring. "You may be next!" "I am bred to ...

Oh god. This was amazing. XD At first, I was skeptical, since I don't really go for that sort of stuff, but on and on the insanity (INSANiTY?) went on ...

ZOMG. You didn't. *rereads* Eek, you totally did. I don't understand WHY young writers do this, but I've read literally dozens of poems like yours, so much so that it ...