Snoink

Guilty as charged! >.> So basically, I suffer from the same problem, which can be, as you know, really annoying! What I do is this: Sometimes, when you hit that ...

Oooh... I hate it when that happens! Especially when it's in increments of years. Well... everybody is different. For me, I'll just stop writing and eventually it'll come back to ...

That idea sounds cool! :D What helps me write a story is me being really excited with the idea. So I'll daydream about what happens, I'll put on my favorite ...

Basically? If you want to write it, go ahead and have fun. That sort of stuff can be really cool. :D If you don't want to write it and the ...

Whoever taught you how to dance? Your posture is a disgrace! Standing there with your feet to the floor you might be a statue with clammy hands (and a rose ...

I'm going to dance around in my underwear and eat Chex mix. Oh, and figure out a way to prank Nate. Because it must be done.

By the way! The no vote is me, just because I really can't stand those kind of polls, so I'll vote no regardless, even if I like the story. Which ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm Snoink. I also happen to be considered one of the tougher critics to please on YWS, but enough with that! So basically, what ...

TAKE OUT THE RHYMING! Nah, just kidding. ;) Actually, it's really not that bad. I like how you used the doll to represent girls in general. Plus, the rhyming scheme ...

Hi Alec! :D I saw this poem and I figured I would review it. Normally, I'm considered one of the tougher critics in YWS, but I do want to help ...

The squirts don’t know Daddy’s here. They scream and thrash calling out (incessantly) Daddy’s name -- on a full bus no less -- and kick my seat so that my ...

*Moved to Writing Tips*

The more you critique (and the better your critiques are!), the more willing people are to review your work. Also, if you do critique and ask people to critique your ...

Big announcement??? Concerning YWS??? ZOMG!

Hehe... some sex actually makes no sense in the evolutionary sense anyway. For example, why would a peacock have all those clumsy feathers and attract females with it, and why ...