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Re: Legend's Hollow
Hey Goober! You asked, so I came. :) First of all, there are A LOT of grammar mistakes. I could go over them all, but I'm lazy and I don't ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: I Used To Fly
Eeeeeeek! Okay, so before I forget, I'm totally starring this. Wait a second! *scrolls up* *scrolls down* Okay, it is starred! :D Now for the critique! I clicked on this ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Red Star Passes
I have no idea what Pern is, but ZOMG. Awesome star! :D
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: When a YWS Staffer PMs You, Please Be Polite
Oy... yes. Sometimes I wonder why people actually want to be YWS Staffers since it can be so stressful. And I am still wondering why anybody would want to be ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Aye You Captain Joe!
*randomhugglesattack* Welcome to YWS! I happen to like drama... I like "Arms and the Man" by George Bernard Shaw, but to each her own, I guess. ;) Anyway, I'm a ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Abortion
Please don't call anybody names or such, otherwise I will lock this thread. Murder is a premeditated plan on killing a specific human that is planned and carried out. Mean? ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Not A Clue
Oh dear! This looks like a madlib! XD See? 1. Noun 2. Name 3. Noun 4. Noun. 5. Adjective. 6. Noun. 7. Noun. 8. Famous celebrity. 9. Location. 10. Impressive-sounding ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: The 'Shift' Key
But it does, Nate! It totally does. And I use capslock automatically. O_o It's easier for me? Otherwise, you have to press down one two keys at the same time, ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Lots of "Will Review For Food" Posts; Few Reviews
Psh, you're no fun. :P
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Pig Droppings [Closed]
Just a quick update! Finals are done, so I've started trimming down this pile a bit. I've skimmed through some, read through others, and critiqued a couple. I'm trying to ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Don't Fret
Hi kissthewitch! You asked for a critique on Pig Droppings, and I'm finally getting around to them. Yes, I know, I suck. XD Anyway, you definitely have an awesome style! ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Another Day Awake
Hello! You asked me to critique this, and finals are over, so to celebrate, I'm totally looking over your poem. And that was totally not a run-on sentence. :P To ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Carrion Death.
Tangent, mi amor! Te amo para siempre y siempre.
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: Advanced Critiques Questions
See this:
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: A Little Questionnaire
1) When did you join YWS? April 1, 2005. So I'm an old member. 2) Did you try out any other writing sites before you joined YWS? Yes, I did! ...
Dec 14, 2008
