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Banned for having two different capitalization things in her name.

No, it's three bajillion million years old. XD I sort of don't like it at all, but I like your new stuff, so it's all good! There are way too ...

I am aware of that. My question is...why a penguin? Why didn't you make it about a piggy? You like piggies! Because! That story is nonfiction. There really is a ...

Banned for mixing the Goo Goo Dolls and Kanji together. XD

To critique a poem To stare at it To think about the lip I bit The broken images are very random a spool of thread a place for tandems How ...

Okay... this might be bizarre, but the coolest image here, the one that made me go, "WOW!" (it takes a lot for me to say that, trust me,) is this ...

The first three lines sound really cool, but they don't connect with the rest of the poem. In fact, the first official line seems to be the fourth line, if ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! This is going to be an MTV review, meaning that I am trying to study and critique, and it's soooo not working, so this is ...

It sounds pretty, but I think you have to work on the transitions. The first and second line really don't go with each other, and you use so many images, ...

Haha, indeed! We love it when points are reset. This poem is more of a grocery list than anything. Instead of being poetic and pretty, you are simply saying that ...

This poem suffers from ridiculous rhyming schemes. That is, it's only purpose is to rhyme. Otherwise, it's just a laundry list of riddles. When it ends, it doesn't really tie ...

I'm using quick reply right now! It's easier. ;) Anyway, I just wanted to come in and say hi! I'm a mod, so if you want to bug me for ...

The first story is mine! :D

:O You took some of my elements for your story! I demand half the prize, if you win. XD (And bulbasaur wins any time of the day. Though, really, Spoink ...

Don't use fallacies. If you're arguments are that heated, most likely it's geared to the emotions and not to logic. EDIT: Also, I'm locking this as well. It really isn't ...