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Incan: also: "He said we’d be doing a better job if we had more Lacan, then he related transgender baseball players to the Russian Ruble crisis of 1998 via what ...

Dude. This has horrible grammar. There are missing quotation marks, oddly placed commas, punctuation that doesn't make sense, words that are capitalized that really don't need to be capitalized, and ...

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It depends on who the characters are, really, and how important their love is to the story. I read a bunch of lesbian erotica stories today, just because it was ...

*hugs beautyandthefish* Eating disorders suck big time. I'm trying to get over one now... it's not your typical eating disorder because it's due to stress of school and not stress ...

Eek! Good luck with that. *hugs*

You can also have a character blank out and then, when he gets up, notice that he's all cut and he's lying on the other side of the room in ...

Actually, I think it was written in English. I attributed the mediocre style to the narrator. I love stories that you can do this with though. Stories that are very ...

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Hi kris! :D I'm just going to go through and comment really quickly on your poem, seeing as nobody else seems to want to do it... Tell the Moon to ...

This is a review of the short story, On Seeing the 100% Perfect Girl One Beautiful April Morning by Haruki Murakami. ~ In the story “On Seeing the 100% Perfect ...

Hello! This is going to be really quick because I accidentally fell asleep while attempting my thermo homework, so I think I have to get to bed at a reasonable ...

XD Dude, we're white Californian girls with the most unsouthern accent you can stomach, but Sgt Salt and I still gave you a video critique. And it kind of sounded ...

Hello Shadow Charleton! :D First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm sorry this critique is a little bit late, but it had to be uploaded. :) Sgt Salt and I ...