Snoink

Hello jcloud14! :D I did a video critique for you. Basically, Sgt Salt (mi hermanita!) and I read your poems out loud, and then we commented on them. By the ...

Dude! XD Okay, so Grif, Sgt Salt, and I critiqued this. Sort of. XD Um... yeah! I rated the film 13+ because there is totally talk about sort of sexual ...

Haha... you need to visit other writing sites then. -_- Some of the critiquers are soooo mean. I mean, you think our critiquers are mean? They're nothing compared to these ...

*throws confetti everywhere* Congrats!

Hello Penguin! :D This is going to be a shortish critique because I'm tired. :P The thing that I noticed about this work was the slow pace. It took several ...

Hello drama queen! :D Okay, first of all, I like to do video critiques. It's generally easier for me, which is really awesome because I have no time for writing ...

Hello shoaib! Welcome to YWS! :D First of all, this an awesome place, and I'm really glad you're a part of it! As you probably guessed from our immaculate posts, ...

Dude, obviously I'm the best writer of YWS... XD No! I am kidding! I'm just a lowly young writer like yourself, but I do have a bunch of favorites! Most ...

Hey Spike! :D I've been doing video critiques a lot lately, especially for poetry because it's a really cool way to see how your poem sounds to the other person. ...

You need to do more reviews. You should celebrate by reviewing. XD

And yet, you are your writer. Strange world, no?

*cries* Can we mods get updated from crammed cubicles to offices?

Dude! I thought you were a newbie? Weird.

Gadi.! We did a video critique of this poem, we being Sgt Salt and me, Snoink. First we read it out loud (which is a scary in itself) and then ...

Nate! Shush! And at least they didn't get a picture of the tire swing. That would have been disastrous.