Snoink

lol

Bug Nate about this--he's in the Washington DC scene, so he might have some funny stories about this.

Strunk and White's The Elements of Style . I swear, I love that book to death. It has everything you'd ever need.

"Actually," Snoink said, walking in behind DX, "if I want to continue the sentence that I started before my action, I split the sentence, put my action, stick a comma ...

To be honest, I didn't read these books. But not because I didn't try! I hated them and put them down. Hopefully they'll stay down... "Interstellar Pig" by William Sleator ...

I can't wait for school! I get to go to uni for the first time and flail around in ridiculously hard courses which are only ten weeks long! :D

Your dialogue grammar is wrong -- listen to JFW. ;) I just wanted to give a quick comment: it seems like you're rushing a lot through these events. And that's ...

Courier, 12 pt, double spaced. It's actually easier to read like that. :)

Lucas sounds slightly sociopathic and it seems unlikely that he would give a second glance at Natalie, especially if they are the same temperament. You need to tweak the characters ...

Hm... this sounds a bit too much like Twilight. :?

When you start writing, you need to first get the words to match the scene. Don't worry about writing sentences yet... what you want to get the words out as ...

Haha... well, seeing as I don't like PotO, I can't see how it can be worse! :D

6.) Kylan. ;)

The "Paul is Dead" thing makes a lot more sense and has way more evidence than this. Therefore, Paul is dead. :) Also, "I buried Paul" is eleven letters. That ...

Er... background information and definitions, please?