-
Re: Every moment.
This seems to want to be an inspirational message, but it doesn't really work with me. I'm used to reading these inspirational stories which are that--stories of people succeeding. It's ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Peepholes from heaven
Hello! You totally reviewed my poem, so I guess it's only fair for me to do the same! :D I'm one of the tougher critics to please on YWS, so ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Using too much foreign language?
Okay! So I was editing FREAK obsessively again, and I came up with the problem of foreign languages. Should you use foreign language in large quantities, even if they are ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: A new kind of magician
I like to make supernatural stories where magic comes from God, and since God is love, then magic would be within love. So you can't actually hurt anyone, or not ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: How can I improve my sentence structures?
Okay! So I have a couple of questions for you... When you focus on your sentences, what happens? I'm an auditory learner, which means that I tend to "hear" what ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Edit during or after?
Uh... a little bit of both. Generally for first drafts, I write it up on paper, just because I don't like editing paper so it forces me to write what's ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: I Hate Emo
There is one thing that everyone has missed. Emo isn't the worst thing out there anymore. The new stereotypical teen that goes on myspace and posts pictures of their crazy ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: I Hate Emo
Dude, this thread is OLD. XD
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: I'm a new member.
Hello and welcome to YWS! :D I can't say I'm a Twilight fan... I have a reading list this high *makes arm motion* and I don't think I'll ever have ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: I'm an oldie... seriously!
As far as webcomics, I used to LOVE Soul-d, but it hasn't been around since 2005. :( Anyway, it's good that you're starting this. I tried my hand at webcomicing, ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: Hi im new!!
We do have a fanfiction forum with a variety of stuff! It's not as active as it could be, but you can always jumpstart it. It's really cool, actually... if ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: Hey
Hey, don't you demerit yourself that easily. ;) Writing competitions are great ways to get started. :) It's awesome to see another non sci fier and low fantasy writer here. ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: Stars
Sci fi??? Robots??? I'm soooo totally in. Anyway, I loved the story. You're quite a talented writer, even though you talk yourself down at every possible opportunity . You're quite ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: Beep.
Fun idea! ^____^ At the moment, I think this is a little too gimmicky. First of all, I would get rid of the periods after beep. I see what you're ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: Hello Fellow writers
Yay! Knitting drives me crazy, but it's awfully soothing at times. ;) Hope you like YWS! It can be kind of hard of getting readers for novels, but just be ...
Aug 24, 2008
