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I don't think this is as creepy as it could be. I mean, it does catch, but it's so ambiguous that it doesn't really show, if that makes sense. It's ...

So, during the writing Olympics, I found out that I was featured member every year... until 2008. This should change. So typically, you have the highest points winner win the ...

Hello! It's awesome that you play trombone and stuff. I've been playing clarinet, but I haven't practiced very much lately, so I kind of fail at life. I am hoping ...

Haha, I hate waiting for inspiration too! Lately, the only thing that's made me write is the Writing Olympics that are just about to end on YWS. However, there is ...

Hello! I didn't read the prologue, but I don't usually read the prologues of stories, so perhaps it's better that way. ^_^ The first thing I noticed was that you ...

Aha! We love new stories. :) Since this a new idea and you envisioned it well, then I won't bother with the nit picky stuff. There are a couple of ...

Dude, that's why they had the bird cage things over the holes... it was just a trap! It's sort of like when I visited San Francisco, and they had they ...

Squee! Dostoyesvsky has recently stolen my heart as well, but with "The Brothers Karamazov." I want to snuggle Alyosha.

Actually, I closed my eyes and picked the first avvie that my mouse thing landed on. :P

Ahhh... this poem is much better than the last one I critiqued. :) Two things! Heat touches your lips as breath gushes past. The taste of sweat is cool; rolling ...

I really really like the second stanza, since it's simplistic and pleasing. Your first stanza, however, has too many metaphors and it seems cluttered. Plus, it doesn't sound pretty. If ...

Is it possible to not include this in the story? I say this because it's really really long and it doesn't look like it would fit in a story, at ...

Hello Mally! :D So I read your poem and it sounds kind of snazzy. I can see what you're doing to make it sound confused. You love to make it ...

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It looks like it would be a lovely picture, but it is a little small. Do you a bigger version of the same picture to show us? :D