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The big thing that is keeping you from making this story truly enjoyable is the fact that you want to make your character semi-retarded. I mean, otherwise it's catchy and ...

Okay! So even before I read the part with Ginsberg mentioned, I realized that you really really liked Ginsberg. Why? Because you were trying to imitate his style. I think ...

You can go to TWS to find all three parts. ;)

For critiquing free verse, consider looking at the imagery that the words create. Tell your brother what you think the imagery is saying and then he'll realize if it's on ...

[s]A pm! Ho Hum. Name: A Thesis Genre: Other Fiction Link: I am patient, and I am only sending you this because I want some brutal S&M criticism from a ...

Sorry for not seeing this sooner! ^_^ I just want to comment on a couple of things. First of all, and this may be a particular preference of mine, but ...

This is funny. :) It reminds me of this one book I read about this detective meeting various "evil" characters and realizing that they weren't that evil after all. So ...

*Moved to Fantasy Fiction*

Don't argue over critiques. Go back to topic, please.

if you act like your character for a week, will you become a better writer or just a diffrent person You will drive yourself crazy and end up in a ...

ZOMG! You share the same birthday? That's slightly awesome!

Is it getting warm?

Those are some links to get you started, mostly about how they look and stuff. ^^

I'm locking this. Xena, PM me if you want it unlocked. We need to talk.

The pig lets out noxious fumes that terrify mankind and suffocate bananas! Poop goes the weasel! Your butt burns all week! END! Never! Don't forget flying squirrel monkeys and blueberry ...