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Moonlight dances in the water, while

Hello! First of all, welcome to YWS. :) I'm an evil critiquer, so hopefully you won't mind my critique too much. I like your attitude of wanting to learn, so ...

Hi Mantis! You asked me to critique this, so here I am! :D Sorry for taking a while to respond. Anyway, let's go over your story, shall we? ;) I ...

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wisemann210, debates are supposed to be well-informed and intellectual. And the only way they can be well-informed and intellectual is for an understanding of the material. And the only way ...

Dude, I am totally going to call you Kei. That will make my life SO much easier. XD Anyway! You're a writer. What's your current project? And! Do you play ...

Haha, I totally did not procrastinate on critiquing this poem because I was playing Pokemon obsessively... really. XD Well... okay, so I was actually editing FREAK, but still. Your poem ...

Back on topic, guys.

The pig lets out noxious fumes

The pig lets out

You might want to rephrase that Saint. Dates and clocks to keep track of time are man made, but time itself is just the natural flow of all objects to ...

The pig

But I don't wanna have my hair pulled! XD Does it make tears come to your eyes and does it make you feel like you can't see very well?

really. I've never really had my hair yanked before. What does it feel like?

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