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Tell me if you can't open Word files... most of the technical stuff on the critique is in the Word file, and it would be slightly ridiculous if you couldn't ...

When you say "series", does that include a thread with several chapters in it all wanting critiques? Yep! And I say this because usually chapter one is enough for me ...

College ate my life, basically. This is closed. Despite any rumor you've heard, I can critique. Really. And here's where you can ask for critiques without me conveniently losing your ...

*seconds Cade* Well, typically, I think, Catholic Christians interpret the Bible literally, while Protestants(oh which I am one) take the underlying message, though not for your reasons. Just a quick ...

Which one is more heavy sounding? "Helter Skelter" by The Beatles or "I Can See for Miles" by The Who? I ask this question because Paul McCartney originally wrote "Helter ...

Er... poke me if I don't critique this in the next couple of days. And I am sorry for this lame post, but... well... I am starting to fall asleep, ...

This thread is about critiquing the speech and is not for debating. Please stick to the topic.

Oh, but this is a lovely beginning! I think it would be lovely still if it were developed just a little more and you would describe the beach a little ...

I saw a grammar error, but I'm hoping someone else points it out, because I don't want to refind it. :P Anyway! Here are my notes. And mind you, I ...

A couple of thoughts: First of all, the first narrator either seems like a girl or an old man. This is because the voice just sounds really really bitter. And ...

Um... neither. To put it in mathematical terms, US English and UK English are subspaces to the larger vector space of English. Within that subspace, there are many different dialects ...

Right now, it's kind of weird, because although Amin is obviously blubbering and stuff, we don't really see what connection he has with Jesus, other than he knows about the ...

What would probably be more realistic is if he had a head injury, somebody panicked, brought him to the ER, and then he waited FOR FIVE HOURS to see a ...

Hello. I was looking at the "Who's on online" and "Memberlist" and beside my name under "last visit" it always say hidden. My name don't even appear on the front ...

LOL, that is a good debate for the debate section. ;) For your country, wherever it is, I'm sure you can deny people the right to bear arms, but not ...