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LOL! The way you said, "Smallest village" reminds me of "Hot Fuzz", that one movie. So yeah... I am getting weird images. But still! It's awesome how you like to ...

Hahaha... I am doing just the opposite. Going from sci fi to fantasy. I think our brains are on the opposite wave lengths. ;) Oh well! Have fun exploring. :)

Much much better! *applauds* Your last stanza rocks out loud. And it's amazing you could do all this in one edit. That makes you awesome. :) Okay. So now you ...

Hola December Nights! I've seen you around, but I think this is the first thing I get to critique of yours, so I'll make it good! :D This is a ...

Quote this. Because I'm goody-two-shoes. You get a dime. Prok gets no dime. This is my third attempt. Please, no one beat me to the punch this time. EDIT: Yay! ...

Hahaha... teachers are so funny! But whatever. And... an eighth grade class isn't exactly the best judge on what poetry is and what isn't, lol. One of our best poets ...

Sweet! We sci fi-ers will end up taking over the world! MWHAHAHAHA... er, sorry about that. ;) You probably have improved over the years, LOL. There's quite a difference between ...

Quote this. Because I'm goody-two-shoes. You get a dime. Prok gets no dime. This is my third attempt. Please, no one beat me to the punch this time. EDIT: Yay! ...

SPEW gets the secret underground basement! Shhh! The Cabassi might hear. ;)

Quote this. Because I'm goody-two-shoes. You get a dime. Prok gets no dime. This is my third attempt. Please, no one beat me to the punch this time. EDIT: Yay! ...

Um... I am confused. And since I almost know you, I shall be horribly frank. So don't kill me, please? ^_^ 1) DUH. Of course her dad doesn't come back ...

Awww... cute ending. Still, this seemed to me more of a list poem than an actual serious attempt at poetry, if that makes sense. I mean, I browsed over your ...

Yes... we are rather tightknit. Though there's plenty of room for everyone. :) In any case, I'll take a look at your poems. I'm a little too thorough, but whatever. ...

Dude, it's kind of amazing how awesome some of the people are on this site. Usually they're the ones who like to get killed from harsh criticism... they're weird like ...

ZOMG! I was eleven when I wanted to become a professional writer too! I hope you're more successful than I am. ;) However, it looks like we like different genres, ...