Snoink

Are you still doing this? If so, what is the genre that you're writing in?

Yay? :?

Patience is a virtue.

*moved to Research*

Er... spew is a good word for this. You really need to focus your writing. Exactly what do you want to say? After figuring that out, say it. And that's ...

Er... this doesn't have to do with planets or big bang. It has to do with accretion discs. :P

Don't go with Freewebs then. They suck. :P I would suggest having a webhost that has php, just because it will make your life that much easier and happier. THIS ...

Closer! :D At any rate, it's a bajillion times better than the other draft. First of all, this paragraph makes no sense: "Bellezza hummed. No one fell in love in ...

I can possibly help. I have a bunch of old CSS templates that can be dug up and reused. What webhosting service do you have or can you possibly have?

So, does this mean that you're permamently up for hire as a crit-machine? Hahaha... actually, if you ask me to do a critique, I'll probably get it done in about ...

Quick typo alert! all bright and shiny, and a with really nice behind ^ should be: all bright and shiny, and with a really nice behind This is a weird ...

Originality. What about Big Brother and Big Sister's Mother? 'Big Mother is watching you'? If we're going through the family and all. Yo mama!

What type of powers does Big Sister have? I've read them...but can anyone explain it in lamens terms? They're the Moderaters - they can edit, move and lock any post ...

I love you and everything but... uh... I didn't get this. I got confused with the abundant similes and I wasn't sure whether there was a war or not and ...

Forget stars. Snoink deserves an honorary spotted pigeon or something. Because that would be really cool. Especially if it cooed when you clicked on it. XD Agreed. Except it should ...