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Haha, I love your use of sharp imagery. That poem was like eating cheddar... yummy! And unlike Fand, I dig the colloquialism. :) Anyway! This was awkward: And anyway, the ...

This has a really really good title that pulled me in and made me want to read this poem. That's a good thing. Now... to the poem itself. It's random. ...

Yes... I can imagine this now. I am walking down the street and suddenly someone stops in the middle of the road and says these immortal lines: "I'm done for, ...

Yuck. This is just description of what lies do to somebody. Big deal. I can tell you how to make a buffered system using chemistry, but just because I can ...

Griffinkeeper *is* the same person. So bug him. He'll be tickled pink to see you. :) I'm his sister, by the way. I heard a lot of good things about ...

*nibbles* Welcome to YWS! We don't bite... hard. But I think you'll find this a good place just to get feedback from your peers on your work and stuff. :D

Me! Me!

w00t! I'm waiting for the results of Lena's date. This should be interesting... XD Alex is slightly not as bad. And poor Sunshine! She tries so hard and yet she ...

Michael is sooooooooo cute! We better see more of him later. His name, incidentally, was the original name of Daniel in FREAK. It is funny that Lena falls in love ...

I just want to point out that this is really really old and really really sucky since it was written THREE YEARS AGO. So, if you want to critique it... ...

Haha... a lot of people seem to be confused. This story is about what the title suggests: the opening of Pandora's Box. In the beginning, it refers to the origins ...

What sort of graphics software do you have?

Because the metaphors support the main idea of the poem? :?

In her dreams, she holds a box. It is a blue box, wrapped in a deep velvet, embossed with little stars and moons. There is no lock, but all around ...

Hahah... nice try. But no. **LOCKED**