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Yeah... because having your computer on and surfing Google is not wasting any energy at all from all the power it takes from running a computer... :roll:

It doesn't really matter.

*coughs* You're not talking about breaking grammar rules. You're talking about set stylistic processes. But yeah. For that, bre adventurous! ;)

The problem of course is that it quickly becomes unfun after years of struggling with a poem. ;)

It really depends on the situation. If it doesn't sound right, then I won't swear. If it does sound right, I will. It just depends on what the word choice ...

LOL, this is old! I agree with Rubric's and Incan. Yes, Neo is bad-ass (in the first movies) and yes, the subsequent movies suck. But yeah. It's funny reading how ...

Best. Masturbation. Scene. Ever. Actually, Simone reminds me of this one girl I know. She was making out in the parking lot and then blushing because people saw her! OH ...

So! The question is when will there be a raunchy sex make up scene between you-know-who. But really! They're such a cute couple together. Too bad both of them have ...

Thanks for all your comments guys! :D I've edited it to your suggestions for the most part. Sureal>> Nice proofreading! I tend to miss words (I found A LOT of ...

The red man's hand says no but the white man says yes so with a flex of my sneakers I walk with the cars trying to find my way home. ...

Look for "Teenz that are Crazy!!" that's the storybook I manipulated. :)

I would play with the spacing a little bit so that each line had a syllable count that was six, almost as if you had eighth note 3/4 pattern. :) ...

It needs something else. In the greatest love stories of all time, there is always conflict that separates the lover from the loved one by some way. There seems to ...

The second stanza is definitely the best. Yay for physics! But... the others lack something. Try injecting less information of the narrator and see what happens.

This is too... narrative. What is the underlying meaning of this poem? You see, it doesn't have one, or if it does, its meaning is so weak that it doesn't ...