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Ugh... usually I'm a fan of your poetry, but this seemed to have too many adjectives for its own good. Better luck next time? ;)

First of all, this totally reminds me of romantic fiction, not dramatic poetry. I mean, yeah, it has line breaks, but poetry is very concise, very rhythmic, and this doesn't ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! First of all, you're going to want a title. Using the standard, the first line of the poem is the title, so you can change ...

This seems to be a very sarcastic piece of writing to me, as if you're almost mocking the girl that seems shy so that she appears to be something more ...

...I've seen worse. :P

Because my family are very suscepisiable drinkers. It's an addiction within my blood and it had split my Dad's side of family in death. I believe if you believe you ...

It's not a matter of age really, it's a matter of life experiences. If you two don't have similar life experiences, then it won't be an even match and you'll ...

FOR abortion BECAUSE nobody has the right to impose their morals on other people. Abortion is something personal--we can see that from this discussion--and by making it a general law, ...

'Nature Boy', the Moulin Rouge version (you know, the song at the very beginning). That creeps me out every time. And the 'Halloween' theme tune *shivers* One time, we got ...

*pops head back in* The problem with abortion, as I see it, is it's so unnatural. I mean, think about it. Consider: every month when you are healthy and not ...

You mean... a newbie I can [s]smother[/s] love with my critique? Yay! You have guts. :) I tried not to make it too harsh, but maybe it sounds that way? ...

Sex is... really not comparable to that sort of stuff. XD I mean, come on. Around here, we joke around and call cookies "orgasmic" and such because sex produces a ...

Swearing *is* prohibited on the debate forum however, so follow the rules. Losing your temper is no justifiable excuse.

If a prostitute gets pregnant, it's her fault. As someone who lives in an area with the some of the higest rates of prostitution in the UK, I can tell ...

*shakes head* I just hope this stays silly doesn't turn into a debate. Because we KNOW that Brad is really the cause of global warming... ;)