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Write an outline for your story. No, not the one that you had originally, because odds are that it sucks. Rewrite your outline and see what's important. Then flesh out ...

Apparently, the pope is not much into bioengineering... XD

Hehehe, what was the question? :P You posted the knowledge... not the question!

:P I forgot not all people were musicians. Oh well! Leggero = lightly sposina = a light bridal dance And yeah... thanks for all the comments so far!

Oh God... this has got to be the best thing I've read on YWS for a while, and it's definitely the best thing by you I've seen. It's so innocent ...

Before you go on about how much it sucks, etc., please please please note that this was written two years ago as a way to fight writer's block and I ...

You know she's a flutist because she strikes up to join the rest of her band with her shoulders powdery white and bare despite il maestro's orders. But nobody minds ...

I think you use too many adjectives. :P Observe! A mass of dejections Printed on the window in the stain Of hands, smearing the light. A shame, pouring from the ...

How uncomfortable it is after the launch when we glance down at the houses and stores and stadiums and realize that we are simply microcosms under a cloudy-foam ocean. It ...

Oooo... thanks for all the comments guys. ^_^ What "it" was about was the struggle for oxygen. Perhaps that wasn't clear? And the line, "round up the usual suspects" refers ...

It's funny because when we met, we thought we were different You with your black trench coat and slicked-back hair And me with my dumpy brown hand-me-down sweater holy in ...

1. Sometimes if it's good and I have nothing to say, I won't. :P 2. I love looking at posts that have no comments. I am, however, put off by ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! I’ve just written some notes on your poem, so maybe that will help? How can I breathe With such strong emotions

Subplots that delve deeper into secondary characters are yummy sources of words. :)

Hahaha, slightly repetitious, but it's cute! And I like the metering. But just in case, I just want to note that you don't have to rhyme everything. That's a misconception ...