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Dude, you are awesome. Like, amazingly awesome. Congrats!

You bug a mod. Those are the guys in green. ;) I locked them for you, since the advice may come in handy (if you want to continue writing poetry ...

Er... I just concentrated on the characters. Whatever the characters thought was natural, I didn't dwell on too much, as far as technology goes or society difference. That way, it ...

Yay! It's her highness's anniversary! *snugs*

All three. Maybe that's why it's taken so long...

This seems too much like a list. Don't worry about constricting your poem into a particular format -- let your soul pour out. It'll be much prettier that way.

The ending with the drunk, mad father is... so cliched. And it doesn't make sense. I mean... *head explodes* 1) If her father is a mean drunk and such, and ...

I hope he wins president this time...

Er... not for FREAK yet. It was for a $160,000 scholarship, lol. But FREAK is almost ready to send out! :D

...suck. :(

This story seems incomplete. I think a better ending would be when the princess comes back to her kingdom.

Um... I read this a couple of months ago, but apparently I didn't comment. So I will! I liked this poem. It was pretty. :)

Well... where's the story part in it? You at least got to get to the story. :P

There was this one "Seen and Not Heard" cartoon for NICK Magazine that was just priceless. There was this guy standing at the corner of the street, looking at the ...

Okay, so I read this really early in the morning and then fell asleep. This gave me THE WEIRDEST DREAM EVER. With that said, the obscure sexual WTF! stuff was ...