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Then... don't chat? :? I know there were several months I didn't touch the chatroom, I disliked it so much. :P

I've only skimmed this, but it looks pretty good! I'll definitely read through it later and give you a less lame critique when I'm more awake. ;) Just two things: ...

I would say thank you to everyone, except all the people I want to thank are forcing me to edit FREAK. So thank you everyone! Now... off to FREAK. And ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! Like Cade said, you'll want to do a couple of critiques before you post your own work. :) Anyway, your poem! I think, at this ...

...where's Pat Buchanan when you need him?

You do dialogue like people writing Spanish do! Who would have thought? I enjoyed it thoroughly, actually. Which is slightly rare because there are few pieces that I'll sit and ...

Er... welcome! :D If you have anymore questions, just ask any random member, lol. Anyone can probably help you. And, if you need big help, ask me. I'm a modtastic ...

I would smile and say, "What's your name again?" Sir or ma'am is okay for boy scouts to use to strangers but... you get funny looks if you use it ...

These words are few of many that can describe the seasons. Play around with the thesaurus and try to make interesting metaphors and stuff.

**Moved to writing tips**

This made me mad. And the sad thing is I can't do anything about it! Grrr...

This is kind of embarrassing. You aren't supposed to make me feel little tears coming to my eyes. :P Anyway, it was sweet. And short. So I cringe when I ...

Get rid of the colons. ;) *shudders* The colons remind me of rping games my friends and I did... not pretty.

evil.

Double post. **LOCKED**