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Re: The YWS Christmas Critique Exchange!
Sammus! Merry Critmas to you! I hope for the best, and maybe I can steal some of the snow that you have and make it my own. :) Here's your ...
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: A friend( will she see me?)
so no one liked this? will if my true feelings dont work, i dont know what will :( Awww... that's not it at all! We're not critiquing your feelings... only ...
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: Are You Excited About The Young Writers Journal?
I know that the math department is interested in the journal, if only because I wrote a story about the magical penguin that lives in the math lab (and yes, ...
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: A friend( will she see me?)
Focus more on her rather than your feelings of her, because let's face it: it's a lot more romantic if you're writing about her eyes and such rather than, "OHMYGOSH, ...
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: All it takes
I think you can make it more obvious, actually. Right now, it's all over the place. Is it a message against wife-beating, drunk driving, or relaxing? Or perhaps it discourages ...
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: Something Exciting that Happens to Be Untitled
To be fair, I helped her. XD
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: Clau's a poopy head! =O
It was taken out of context. And you realize I am not Clau? XD Silence you, or I shall take out the SPORK OF DEATH.
Dec 20, 2007 -
Re: Clau's a poopy head! =O
Hahaha! She admitted it herself! HAHAHA...
Dec 20, 2007 -
Re: Something Exciting that Happens to Be Untitled
this iz teh most aesome thing i've read1 rrite ,more.
Dec 20, 2007 -
Re: The Murder of Crose [Part One]
I'm a horrible person and didn't read through the other critiques. Oh well. Forgive me for any repetition. :P [The Beggarboy] It was the Beggarboy who found the body. The ...
Dec 20, 2007 -
Re: Happy Birthday Crysi
*thinks of something to say* *decides against it* Um... happy birthday!
Dec 20, 2007 -
Re: Justin Timberlake - Still on my Brain
Please, only put your original lyrics on this forum. **LOCKED**
Dec 20, 2007 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)
The sad part is that the side you see is the least piggiest side of the room. XD And the mac sees things backwards, for some reason.
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: Question
Pretty much, yeah! :D
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: So, I was like, really bored in Spanish today...
I want a fish taco... **moved to Randomness*
Dec 19, 2007
