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*adds stuff* This is Anglican, but it's from the fun two-thousand year old tradition things that the Catholics have, too. ^_^ Random symbolic things you might be able to use: ...

Wow... that's hilarious!! :lol: So whatever happened to the rest of FREAK? Is it ever going to acutally get published? ~Yoyo 8) ... after finals, I'll submit it in. Really... ...

Lovely stuff here! Was communism a bad thing back then? I seem to remember that America was trying to be "friends" with Russia, so it was still okay. A better ...

This story... does not make sense. 1. Why would the character be so dismissive? She has apparently been put into a fantasy scenery and her biggest concern is that this ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! It's nice to see you here. The topic is interesting, because sin is an interesting topic. It can be so JUICY. Still, this is ...

Don't rhyme. You're dealing with too much substance to worry about making every single line rhyme, and it's killing your poem. So write what you're really thinking, and screw any ...

This is either too long or too short, depending on who you ask. Right now, we have the first line, which is a fragment, and I bet if you wanted ...

Stick some conflict in it. :D Even the Native American stories in their mythology are chockful of how the stars got trapped in the sky and so on. By making ...

Slightly, though activity is... um.. slightly dead. But still! It has the first draft of FREAK and Unicorn Killers on it, so therefore it is automatically awesome. ^_^

A tiny forum called FGT. It's awesome, though slightly dead and exclusive. XD

No. I think the last section is superfluous.

Well that sucks. :( Prokaryote Yes, but in the end, it'll be better for the site. ^_^

This was nice to read. :)

So I have to pick a springy object to look at or observe and do a report on. I half want to get a trampoline but... yeah. So any hints ...