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No more stupid comments. Nobody's stupid here! And if you didn't understand what I wrote, that's fine. As long as Ayra understood it, I'm happy. :D But really... math is ...

Yay for nonresponse. :P

Just as a forewarning, don't talk about these and walk down a crowded hallway at the same time. You will get strange looks. :wink: sounds like you speak from experience.... ...

I love the last line. It's so ironic! :D With that said, you may want to make it more ironic by being more specific. Instead of saying "world of contamination" ...

What a Waste - Poem

Hehe, funny! :D First of all, you don't have to capitalize every other letter. Really! Now... for the poem! :D What a Waste - when Alison Becker bled All over ...

Okay, which mod deleted my double post? Probably Big Brother. :D And please, do not panic if you do double post, accidentally. We won't eat you. Really. That's SPEW's job, ...

It's a conspiracy, I tell you! A conspiracy!

Eek! Ulcers are so cute! *desires*

Eek, you're trying much too hard to rhyme. If you can't rhyme, then don't. :P The wheel continues on,

Ooooh... some really nice stuff in here. Actually, I think the third stanza would be the best starting point for this. So: If my long lost memories were dyed purple, ...

Aw, you know I love you! Otherwise, I wouldn't give you such a critique. ;) Anyway! Continuing onward! The light that was shown, Was only the dark, You do realize ...

YES. YOU SUCK. No, really, why ask such a question like that? XD We don't answer questions like that here, really. Our purpose is to help you get better. Yes... ...

Hehe, I think it's not your best. :P It's more of a rant with line breaks, really. I would rather have more substance on it. Which I know you can ...

Nice idea! And I liked the title. It was very succinct, but that's a good thing. :P Be careful about all the "ands" you have in here. So I would ...