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What a cute story! You're focusing too much on the words and not enough on the story. Look at the individual sentences, yes, but remember to tie it in with ...

I use my fingers. :)

OMG. IT WILL BE AWESOME. And I loved the book, but I hated the last two, so I'm hoping the movies improve on the books! :D

Have your main character count to infinity? ;) No, seriously, develop another character's story. For instance, for my very first, completely laughable version of FREAK, I only developed two characters

Weird question. I'm rating it R. But anyway, I think that it is highly unlikely that someone would just burst into the room and, upon finding their father in bed ...

*moved to Nonfiction*

Yeah but... why would any kid want to play with her in the first place? O_o *is slightly creeped out* I would pick a better model. XD

This is...? ;) So when is it going to be on youtube? :D

Hehee, it does sound fun! :D The only qualm I would have with it is that it is the holiday season and, as such, we're all going to be slightly ...

:P My nano sort of... imploded. XD CHAPTER NINE: IN WHICH THE HEROINE GOES ON STRIKE AND THE AUTHOR OF DOOM, DEATH, AND DESTRUCTION BASHFULLY TRIES TO ENTERTAIN YOU, THE ...

Scotty, you officially are a crazy person. 'Nuff said.

46,228, so far. XD

This really isn't a chapter. You need to develop it much more fully than this.

Ugh. This sucks. I know that, if I get something that low, my dad would consider throwing me out of the house. Just hold your breath, be glad you aren't ...

Okay! So apparently, my character is on strike, and the only way I can get her to continue the story is by entering in the story myself and beating her ...