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Re: 7000!!!
Well, now I'm never going to catch up. Never say never! :P Besides, maybe I'll turn into a pink flamingo, won't be able to type, and then you'll definitely get ...
Nov 25, 2007 -
Re: 7000!!!
Woo! Go snoinkers! You have to get to 10.000 soon, so we can know what the secret level is! Haha, don't worry! That's the goal. :)
Nov 25, 2007 -
Re: YWS Most Results!!
...pink flamingo?
Nov 25, 2007 -
Re: Hypothetically speaking, of course!
So! Truth or dare! Hypothetically, let's say you click on a story on YWS and lo! It has no grammatical or spelling errors. This is all very hypothetical, by the ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: Letters from the Gods
Oooooo.... I liked this stanza: IV. Your life is Changing and you Don’t know why, The world is Screaming so You cry, cry, Cry. And I don't even know why. ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: Get over that block
Or you can twist it around in such different ways that the said prompter will look at you like you're a crazy person. XD But yes! It does help! :D
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: 7000!!!
Let's hope it's a lucky number! :D
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: Forget
Don't worry so much about rhyming! Just get your poem out... it really doesn't have to rhyme to be poetry. :D
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: A place called your home
Hello again! I think this poem would be much better than it is currently if you added some examples in it. :) For example, if I had an essay about ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: True Jewels
Hello and welcome to YWS! I haven't really seen you yet... which is kind of sad really, but whatever! I think this poem would be much more powerful if you ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: A lick of freedom
My favorite of this poem was the first three lines: I am only a heresy, Wishing to end this pointless, endless dance And run off with the sky. Because it ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: Anna
Hello and welcome to YWS! :D I'm interested in this Anna character... perhaps, in this poem, you can add a little more back-story on her? Sort of like in "Lullaby" ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: Blind happy things painting
Oooooh... I love the idea. Anything with colors makes me happy! I just love using symbolism and stuff for colors. My favorite part has to be this line, "They paint ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: Weeping
Hmm... well, the beginning doesn't really catch because "makes," "hate," "contemplate," and "aches" are so similar that at first I thought that you were using an aaaa format instead of ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: Lulu
Love, you know you want to use the YWS spell checker. There are just too many misspellings in here! ;) I digress. The poem seems to be avoiding the Main ...
Nov 22, 2007
