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This, believe it or not, has too much imagery. Did that make sense? Basically, right now you have a bunch of fluffy images just bouncing around. Rather demented fluffy images, ...

At the moment, there's a bunch of pretty moments, but they don't really seem to be connected. Introduce the fire a little more, and everything will become more smooth, I'm ...

I have to agree with Colly here. The first stanza has too many "violent" words that intend to shock, but don't. It's only until the turkey comes about that you ...

I haven't critiqued fiction in a while, mostly because I haven't seen anything that interested me or was grammatically correct, and I am pleased that yours passed both tests! Mind ...

Don't forget that writing is an essential element to almost any career! I'm going into Law, and knowing how to write creatively is a must. Dude, totally. I love writing ...

Read this before posting in the advanced forums. Remember, you have to upload it to the site. ;)

lab reports count? I plan to be a chemical engineer with an emphasis on bio-y stuff. XD Though I will publish my novels! :D

Congrats! Although, it would be much cooler if you like... voted monkey. :P

I don't get it...

*pets imac*

Neglected Mario Character Are You? [/URL]

Ooooh! I like this! I like this a lot. There's only one thing that really bugs me. "Tuesday’s" should be "Tuesdays" without the apostrophes. But I really like it... just ...

Awww... this is so cute! The only slightly weird part is when it is "bed hog" because he's a dog in every other ending. ;) And don't forget to rate ...

Nicely done! Just a couple of comments from me. ;) Soul mate. do you exist or are you a figment of my imagination? Were you around the last corner and ...

And finally! The last post here! Remember, if you need any physics help, just PM me or something and show me your problems. ;) And remember, take these answers with ...