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Re: Sex Scene
Watch TV when you're writing it. It'll distract you from thinking about the rape scene, and you might get something pretty creepy and original when doing that.
Oct 20, 2007 -
Re: Wide Awake in a Dream
Awww... you know I love you, Sureal. But this is a tough love critique. The poem is pretty, but towards the end it just rambles on at length about confusion, ...
Oct 20, 2007 -
Re: Cutting out a Character
For FREAK, I cut out this guy named Michael because he was basically stupid and irrelevant and horrible in twelve different ways. Then I put in Daniel, who served the ...
Oct 20, 2007 -
Re: Hate
Actually, I heard that the polar opposite of love is indifference. Which sort of makes sense, if you think about it. Because hate is passionate... if he hates Jews, then ...
Oct 18, 2007 -
Re: Isn't Being Alive the Greatest?
MY TEEN ANGST FILLS ALL. WOE IS ME.
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: So... where have I been?
You have a completely amazing story and I am so glad that you are doing wonderfully now. :D
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: We are the CRA
Oh yes, a very secretive organisation ;) Lol. Obviously. ;)
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: You like pigs? Good!
If, for some reason, you want to buy something pig-related on the web, you don't have to look very far! You can always go to The Piggy Boutique . That's ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: YWS Wars: The Conqueror Invasion
Name: Snoink Rank: 5 red + Organization: SPEW Ship/Plane: The Oink Star. (Sort of like the death star, except it kills stories and poem en masse. And it has pigs. ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Introduce Your Writing
Hehe, well we do have a section for it on YWS. ^_^ It's called Writers Corner. Check it out! :D
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Line Breaks
It depends on what kind of poem you're writing, of course! :D This may be helpful.
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: What's so bad about Emo poetry?
Emo poetry tells us that the narrator is sad and doesn't give us any depth beyond that. Sad (possibly suicidal) poetry shows us that the narrator is struggling with a ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Practice your Signature!
Um... I drew a picture on GIMP, saved it, and downloaded it on YWS. ^_^;; *pokes Saint Razorblade and Esme* Dooooo eeet.
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Practice your Signature!
We're all going to be world-famous novelists, so why not practice our signatures? ;) Post the signature of your username here. Feel free to make it as pretty as possible! ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Beta Reader Appreciation Day?
Hehe, we love beta writers! I have a couple for FREAK. They are intensely helpful. ^_^
Oct 13, 2007
