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Eep! I love the new banner. It's so pretty! And happy! And it reminds me of several Beatles songs! Haha, it also reminds me of FREAK. Which doesn't hurt. ;)

Oh my... this is a lovely poem. Very sad though. :'( Dogs do not live long enough. >

Ooooo! Nice poem. I'm impressed. :D They all nit-picked it to death, so I won't bother trying to top them. However! I think it would be cool to change the ...

I've been browsing the literary forums, and there are SOOOO many good stories and poems that often are looked over, just because they haven't been rated. So rate it! Not ...

Hehe, a poem about woe! :o Anyway, I think you're relying a little bit too much on adjectives. Adjectives can be lovely words to add for poetry, but only in ...

Yay! We love rewrites. ^_^ First of all, remember to rate it! Then it can be on the front page. ;) Anyway, I critiqued this before, I think, so this ...

Imagine yourself in a car. With an inexperienced driver driving. So you know how you stop. Stop. Then... accelerate! STOP. This is the impression I get from your poem. Line ...

Ooo! I liked this! And, though you might not have intended for this, I can see some big "Adam and Eve" metaphor, and that just kmakes me happy. Very sophisticated ...

Oh my, you are right! This was a fun read! :D I have to say, this has been one of my favorite poems on YWS for quite a while, simply ...

First of all, I rated this for you! Next time, be sure to rate your poems and stories, because then they get to appear on the front page of YWS. ...

Of course it classifies as poetry! :D Interesting idea! I haven't really seen anything like this so far, so good for you! :D And I think it's pretty cool that ...

Haha, I had Number 7 as an avvie once, and it freaked Nate out. It was kind of funny. xD

Basically, choose a work from the person above you and critique it. Then put the title and link of the story/poem/thingy you critiqued on this thread. Then somebody gets to ...

Banned for not having a real country!

OMG! *flails*