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Re: I'm trying to be funny, but...
Wait... is this going to be a poetry piece or...?
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: I'm Gonna Laugh
Okay! I must ask... how exactly did this poem kill a spider? XD But this poem is... weird. It reminds me slightly of a Beatles song in which John Lennon ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: need ur critics for my writting . . .
*Moved to Nonfiction*
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Flowers for the Wake
Hehehe, you know I love you. ;) The dialogue between the girls sounds exactly like that -- dialogue between girls. I don't see them as being women, which is kind ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Treacle
Awww... this is so cute! I think this is my favorite poem from you so far. But that will probably change as you get more sophisticated and awesome. ;) But ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Thought of the moment
Oh my gosh, I should be doing homework.
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Alone
I didn't comment on this? I thought I did! Shame on me, lol. Anyway, I think it's cool how you can just say, "Oh, this is one of my old ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Upon Broken Lands
Ooo... I like this! :D One thing I would get rid of is the second stanza, "And so it begins" because it reminds me too much of LOTR. But I ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Elder's Secret (Removed)
It's not exactly 1666, because modding comes first, but it's pretty close! :D Anyway, here it is. And, halfway through recording, I realized that you had dial-up so... hopefully it ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: The Quick Reply Box
He didn't use coding... he used MAGIC.
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Physics is...
This is concerning. People actually think physics is fun????
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: War in Iraq
Haha, I would attack them too. ^_^
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: War in Iraq
LOL, our reputation has always been terrible. ;) We're in Iraq now and, whether our motives were correct or not is one thing, but I don't think our intentions were ...
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Re: Polygamy
Hehe. It might be kind of cool, but I think the lawyers would try to kill us for it. Imagine making legislation for this! XD
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: The Quick Reply Box
Dude! Suddenly I want to critique... *stabs physics homework*
Sep 23, 2007
