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You're doing it right! :D

SPEW gets its own song! :o I can't wait to listen to this! :D

Hmmm... are you talking about the dimensional analysis that means putting your stuff in fractions and then multiplying it to each other? In any case, figure out what you want ...

Because I've been getting these questions, I figure I would answer them really quick and if you see them, great, and if you don't, too bad. 1) Have you published ...

Aww... this is kind of sad. The only thing that really bugs me is that it seems to go from first person to third. So... is the narrator of the ...

You're trying to hard to stretch the metaphor. Instead of letting us, the lovely readers, decide that the metaphor of the wet flowers and ropes represent a lost virginity, you're ...

This has too many adjectives to make a strong point. Let me demonstrate -- if I took out all the adjectives, it would look like this: Sacrifices to skies Offer ...

And... now there is nothing to critique. LOCKED.

I tried to do this for a week and I ended up doing like... 20 critiques in a day one time. Funky stuff, really. But yeah. Even a comment or ...

So much for advanced critiques... I read over nine pages (so far!) and instead of giving a critique, I'll just ask questions. 1. Did she leave it in the trash ...

Hehehe... I want to see a dog hum something! :D

Dude, this is awesome. Thanks Nate!

Okay, I raised up the volume so it should be better now.^_^

A conversation between me and my lovely brother. And yes, I have a bit of a cold. :P Size: 21.1 MB Length: 37 minutes File:

All of SPEW. Because they're awesome. Um... besides them? Adam Wiggy Reyu Dreamy ...there's more. But already, I think I may be at thirty, so I should probably stop. O_o