Snoink

Back in my younger days, I read some pretty depressing books, such as 1984 and Poe's work and other stuff. Well, they're not that depressing actually, but when I was ...

In some harsher critiques on YWS, you'll find a lot of references to navel gazing. So what is this? Well, technically, it's staring at your belly button. That's the very ...

My first tip? Get OBSESSIVE over metering. You see, rhymes will come and go, but what you need is a consistent metering. For example (forgive me if I use my ...

A lot of people, especially less-experienced writers, underestimate the value of grammar. Which is more than understandable. Instead of the wrong spellings, which is easy correctable, grammar is an if

Semicolons indicates a dramatic pause, which is later finished. "This is not a good idea; it will lead us into danger." "Hush!" Ellipses (the dot-dot-dot thing) indicate a trailing off. ...

Memorize the following rules: “That sucks,” he said. “That sucks!” he said. “Does that suck?” he said. “That sucks,” he said, slapping his knee. “That sucks!” he said, slapping his

Now it's not white and blue! :o What do you guys think?

Awww... if you don't want to have this reviewed, you shouldn't put this in the literary forums section. Because that's where you critique stuff! Anyway, you really really need to ...

Did I mention how awesome this is? Because it's awesome.

The greatest story I ever wrote was the one where someone told me to scrap it and start over. And I followed that advice... lol. Anyway, on to the critique. ...

I was mentioned once, seven months ago *laughs* Let's have a little fun *cracks fingers* Aetlanding and Little-Lucy (or staring at ceiling) Magnificent_Ego and Meep (Don't ask me why) That ...

I'll only allow it if Ego is added to our harem. ;)

This poem doesn't work because it doesn't have a conclusion. What did you intend to say? :?

I liked everything that was violent. Which sounds slightly sadistic, but it's true. When you described love as a beating, then it was just so much more interesting because a ...

Um... here's a somewhat simplified explanation that you might be able to understand. Basically, it's using a matrix to determine the unknown coefficients of the chemicals. My problem is basically ...