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Maybe, but 1+6+6+6 is 19, which is how old I am, so it's all good.

I wrote a short tutorial about this! :D Anyway, also have them be portrayed as different. My mysterious character is Sadie's father, and he is seen as different by all ...

I enjoyed your story very much! I had my sister read it and we both read it together. On first glance, I thought the dialogue was too simple, etc., but ...

Lucy>> He visited us! :D

My sister: "Reyu??? The REAL Reyu???" Me: "Yeah." My sister: "I don't have that many exclamation points in my voice!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Um... punctuation mine. Anyway, I decided that, for my critique, ...

Aw... yes, I love critiquing newbies' works. :D

I think he does... but I also think it's a joke. XD

I'm sixteen posts from my 1666th review! Because this is a very sadistic number, I was hoping that this critique would be a very sadistic critique. Or helpful. But we ...

Yeah, definitely keep it "there are" instead of that made up rhyme you have. I don't really like the beginning and ending lines, the pitter-patter ones. The beginning one, I ...

The thumb looks weird, so maybe adding some wrinkles or shading will help it be less straight and more curved.

This part is the most interesting part of the poem: Tick tock, Tick tock. Time is passing by And all I do Is sit here looking Out my window Watching ...

Hehe, your sister's boyfriend is funny. ^_^ Tell him that he must come up with another rhyme for clog so he can have another line. It'll make everything sound so ...

Don't have him rub his toes -- this might make the toes fall off, and that is bad. And cut this part out, "and prayed he would live to see ...

I name it Alfred. :)

Brutality? Sign me up! :D Um yeah. Lucy already dealt with grammar and stuff (I think--I only skimmed it) so I might be repetitious, but yep! Continuing on... The air ...