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This has too many far-flung adverbs thrown about to make it powerful and too many strong verbs to make it powerful as well. Remember: brevity is the soul of wit. ...

I did like it. Dono said that the deaths were random, but I didn't really think it was very random. I thought more people would die, but not a lot ...

My mom ate something with an open-faced English muffin, but it had teryaki sauce and pineapples and ham. But I don't like pineapples much, so I decided to come up ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! Remember to rate your story, because then it'll appear on the front page and everyone will be able to see it. Also, I'm going ...

Hahaha... oh dear. We have quite a few banninated members. Anyway, I'm part of Big Brother, which means that I'm a scawy mod. RAWR! But, more importantly, I am a ...

But... I like lines. Anyway, I used to carry a couple of notebooks wherever I went, but... it didn't work out because I kept missing details and everything that, if ...

Haha! Well, at least I had a brownie!

Haha, I noticed that. I was like, "Why is he living there?" But oh well! You can't find me through whois though! I think.

Haha, I knew he would give us clues soon! Just like Carmen San Diego...

Don't go from third person to first person. It's just... not cool. For instance, you have this: William knew that he had no chance of wining the fight, but being ...

The internet?

I looked up "Nathaniel Lee Caldwell" and apparently, he resides in a lot of cemetaries. O_o

Well, he'll give you clues and stuff so you can hunt him down, most likely.

I think he's like Carmen San Diego and doesn't have an address! :o

Maybe! Which country, providence, and time setting is this in?