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Pretend you're doing a thorough critique on somebody from YWS. The grammar is good, which astounds you and, because it's so good, you're going to do a thorough critique on ...

Eep. This was weird. I had no idea it was going to turn out the way it did, because you said "the city" and automatically that brought forth the image ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! :D A couple of things, before I begin the critique. First of all, if you want this story to be on the front page (and ...

Well, you already say after the aligators "I exclaim, not constraining my emotions into words, but saying it with my mind." So I don't think you need anything more than ...

Go to this forum: It's at the bottom of the community forums. And please remember... just because you apply doesn't necessarily mean you will be accepted.

Sam said plane crash? I thought it was divorce. Or something. O_o Anyway, it was cute, but I guess I wasn't that touched, because chocolate is poison for little ducks, ...

First of all, if you want to have this appear on the front page, you must rate it! Then people will read the first lines and probably be sucked into ...

Failed experiment. :P Some of the mentors turned into junior moderators. But... your best bet is to become either a welcomer or instructor, if you so desire.

Well... if you feel horrible by not continuing it, you can revamp the plot. Or tell it in a different POV. Or change the style you're writing it in. Or ...

I'm sorry, but Nazis/facists aren't people. PSH! They're totally people. Unless... of course... they're freaks! Which means, they would have to belong in FREAK. SPEAKING OF WHICH! Claude is a ...

The second way! But Jack says it the first way. Hmmm...

This seemed to be one of your more honest poems, and it worked nicely. It was pretty and all that jazz. :) Use Cal's line breaks suggestion for the third ...

Hooray! :D

Killing them with kindness, no? :D

There's been a couple of questions on how to create realistic characters. Being a critiquer, I compiled a list of five things you can do to make your character sound ...