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Ahhh! You can't leave it on this cliffhanger! I mean, it looks as if it's going to be more to the story, and then it just... stops. And that's not ...

Math tutor. I work 10-15 hours a week and get $9.10 an hour. I could get more if I work independently, but oh well! :D

Um... first of all, welcome to YWS! Second of all... you mean how to write romances? What attributes from the other person do you like? Why do you like the ...

*moved to Writing Tips*

Hahaha, just bug Nate, Firestarter, or Mesh. They'll be able to change it to most anything you want, provided the name hasn't been taken. ;) And you might not be ...

May I press my fingers firmly on your neck? As your skin rubs off on mine? Just a quick thing... I would make the first question mark a comma. Otherwise, ...

Don't describe how it feels... describe what is happening. For example: The Beating The first blow caught me sideways, my jaw Shifted. The second beat my skull against my Brain. ...

If this is not your work, then please do not put it in literary forums. >< And it's supposed to be "falling in" not "far beneath." *moved to Poetry Discussion*

Psh, it's simple. Buy sixty hot dogs and sixty buns. Then it'll be okay. LCD FTW!

I write naked. Um... just kidding. I don't think I have many writing habits. I do have many habits that involve procrastinating from writing though! ^_^

Ah yes, a poem about S&M. Lovely. This is a classical example of navel-gazing emo poetry. Try to go beyond the narrator's viewpoint, and I'm sure it will be something ...

Nosy parents? :P Nah. My dad doesn't even know about FREAK, or even the title. It's kind of funny, actually.

Meh, there's something missing with this, and that means that I'll have to pummel you because it's part 3 that's missing and why, why, WHY did you post this without ...

I don't know. Tess's character doesn't make sense. If she usually is a party animal, why would she be so quiet on the sidelines? I mean, we get the feeling ...

Aha! First of all, if you want to have critiques on this, you MUST seperate this into paragraphs by making a space between each paragraph. Then it's easier to read ...