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Whoa, that's pretty sweet. What happened in the nightmare?

Very old school.. pretty cool! :D In the last stanzas, try to make it more concrete and see whether turning it from the abstract to the solid makes it different. ...

In the beginning, the line breaks do seem a little forced, but halfway through, they start to make sense. I'm just wondering: wouldn't it be better with the last word ...

This could probably be published in some teen magazine... I think. Except I don't read teen magazines, so maybe I'm wrong? Moving along! ;) The main thing I would say ...

Haha, Mesh and I look like we're the tallest in that picture. ^_^

I hate you. This story was awesome and gave me chills and even made me not want to read the ending of it, because I was scared what would happen ...

This is not poetry. This is basically a rant that asks a lot of questions and then tells you that bullying is bad. Mind you, I'm not saying that this ...

Sort of. Once, when I was really really little, I saw this weird soap opera with this guy who was caged who said something like, "Daisy is our only hope" ...

You, my dear, are one of the rare and few very talented writers who exist. With that said, I shall comment. First of all, this was a spooky piece and ...

As this is a fanfiction and I am a mod, I shall put it in its rightful place! :D I think you need a catchier beginning. At the moment, it's ...

Eep! I don't know much about yoga, but I will bump the thread and comment on a sentence, okay? :D Whether you're English or western, jumping or leading, they can ...

So sad. :( I have a doggie (a 10 year old german shepherd) and even just thinking about her dying is horrible. I can't imagine living through it. :( Okay... ...

Yeah.

[s]AHHH! NOT ANOTHER PERSON WHO LIKES HP FANFICS!!![/s] Welcome! :D And DUDE. Did you just say you ate foamy squirrel, or was that my imagination? If it wasn't, then here, ...

Self-taught and carrying the responsibility of school? Dear me... you must be a superhero or something. ;)