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As promised, I am here! The story was nice to read and I enjoyed. With that said... the comments! There wasn’t any breeze that day. Which was odd, honestly. The ...

w00t! First comment! I am going to take all the adverbs out. A void of falling petals Spiraling down in a symphony Singing songs we cannot hear And crashing. Still ...

What do you think makes a good girl character? Is it the usual 'staying true to herself' or 'proving she's just as good as the guys'? And more importantly, what ...

Eh... I would use quotation marks and just say, "She signed, 'I hate being a mute!'" Or something like that. Tricky question! Still, I think I would use quotation marks ...

Yes, CCf is awesome, cause a)we don't eat cats! b)We are outside the jusrisdiction of mere mortals c)Our memebrs have ties to...not sure, but I think, at least, the CIA, ...

There's a lot of nonsense about what conflict is, but it really doesn't have to be so complex. All you need to know is that conflict is created by characters ...

Whatever. The bottom line is that it is NOT historical fantasy. The only way I meant that it's a "baby" dream is that it's small and there isn't much to ...

Okay... no grammar? Lovely. You don't seem to have bad grammar anyway. The stench of dust filled her nostrils as she entered the abandoned throne room. It was evident that ...

OMG. I've been reading lots of short stories and this one has particularly caught my eye. It's called, "Amy Foster" and it's strange... so strange that I thought I wouldn't ...

I read "garden woes" as "garden hoes." Something tells me those words were not meant to be together. :P

Moved to Writers Corner! :)

Hahaha... every kid's dream, no? But it's soon going to turn into their own personal hells. O_o

Ugh... it looks like her eyes are attacking her face. Or something. I know it's supposed to be anime, but maybe it can be a little smaller?

Yay! I get the first critique! Or... at least, when I'm writing this, there are no critiques. Hehehe... now I feel special! :D As you requested, I will not spare ...

It was almost sunset when Kai was on his way him. He was excited about telling his mother the news. Finally they would be able to leave this hate filled ...