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Right now, you have a very abstract poem that have abstract images combined with abstract meanings. Try to spice it up with the concrete! Combine these images with humanity. Adding ...

You Died I once had a dream Where as hard as I tried I couldn't stop you from dying. I would wake up at school, They'd announce it in class ...

This is what we call a rant. That is, it goes on and on about the abuse of children and everything but... it's not really poetry. First of all, poetry ...

You can't just describe what is there. I mean, I love the beach and everything, but you gave us nothing human to connect it to until the last stanza. That's ...

This stanza irked me, mostly because it went close to navel-gazing: I wish we didn't have to hide from him, By sneaking out at night. He refuses to give "us" ...

Holy crap... I don't remember my 1000 post like... at all. :P But congrats! A thousand is a lot, especially if you didn't spam. :P

Arial looks... too happy. Belle is my favorite because she always looks pretty. Pochahontas is... um... her shoulder scares me. But I like her expression.

I would have to go with Bugs Bunny (because we love cross dressers and people who can do hare cuts). I mean, I saw this one cartoon where Mickey Mouse ...

Wow... I never knew that... you learn something every day! - How do you feel about the concept of "Gay Pride"? The concept? Okay. If you want to be proud ...

Thanks for the critiques! Kit>> I couldn't find the short story online, but I'll probably try an anthology in the library and see what it says. :P kitty15>> Hooray! I ...

...haha. Um... gross? I hope you move on to better projects. :P

Don't focus on how you feel. Focus on what has been done to you and make us feel your pain indirectly. So basically, what has "you" done to make the ...

Her lips parted and in Menelaus' ear she whispered: "We'll always have Paris." She was promptly shot at dawn.

Yeah. It's called FREAK. I had to rewrite it several times already and the ending is mediocre, so I'm going to have to have surgery on it. Sadness. :( And ...

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