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Are you graduating this year? Step up! :D

Kitty, since it makes sense that she should go to her best friend's place. We love best friends! :D

Ahhh! Why did I not see this? *snuggles story* Hehehe... I may be sleep-deprived or something, but there were some things I didn't get. Did you and "Fucker" actually go ...

First thing I noticed was that your poem relied too heavily adjectives and adverbs. Looking back at the poem, it's not that there's a lot of adjectives or adverbs... in ...

I liked the beginning sentence because it made me interested in why she was curled on the branch of a tree. The rest was... meh. First of all, maybe it's ...

Hmmm... I think the rhyming is a little too forced for this to work. Also, instead of just telling us what is happening, show it to us. What images could ...

Hehehe... it's time for a mad-lib critique! You know what that means. Fill in the spaces with the appropriate words and then see what this happens to your critique. Remember ...

Read this: WTF ... Please do not imitate this. The ending is too "omgthedooropenedbutshedidn'tseethemanoutside"-esque. Basically? Don't tell the readers, "OMG, LOOK! SEE??? THERE'S ACTION EVENTUALLY!"

*comes like a rain cloud* Okay, this time I'm not going to comment on the grammar or spelling. With that said, there ARE some grammatical errors, so you gotta watch ...

Hahaha... the MLA Squad is awesome.

Pulchritudinous? Pulchritudinous? No. This is one of those instances where you're trying to spend a hundred dollars for something that take ten cents. Try another synonym of beautiful. Just not ...

Hello and ( once more) welcome to YWS! The first thing you want to do is check your spelling. I don't really want to waste my time on that, so ...

Hehehe... romantic fiction. I used to avoid that place because I had never fallen in love, but things have changed recently, lol. I'll take a look at your stuff.

This was pretty and it reminded me of one of several worn places I had been to and absolutely loved. Though the others are right in that the conclusion wasn't ...

*moved to Fiction Discussion* I hated the circle of magic series, actually. It had too many POVs and I was quite confused. However, I loved her Lioness quartet. This, of ...