Snoink

Snoink sauntered in. "Can I have a tall glass of strawberry soda?"

Okay! I liked it! General comments.... 1. Red sucks. Change it to black. :P 2. Mention the name "Marie" earlier. It was kind of confusing. 3. How old were these ...

The shading on her legs is kind of... weird. Choose a less strong color so it doesn't look like she has old legs.

I liked the beginning and I liked how it had such a surreal feeling to it. Yet... I feel like I didn't really have any meaning to it. I mean, ...

*checks dictionary* Hehehe... Iz iz gud at zpelling! Still! American: realize English: realise

It's fun playing with indents, but I think that it would work better if you made it more of a dialogue. I mean, right now it's sort of like a ...

Hmmm... the first two lines do sound archaic, but in a very awkward way, so I'm not quite sure it really works as a hook. Are the last two lines ...

I can lock it if you so desire. But it would probably be better to abandon ship. Nobody's going to hurt you if you decide not to write in this ...

Here's the history!!!! A couple of decades ago, no writer for the general public would dream of addressing the reader directly by using the second person. The approach would have ...

Wiki article on Pat Buchanan And SPEW... nobody knows what SPEW is, so you can't be a newb! ;)

No... this isn't a "which one is better" thread. Because obviously American is better. ;) No, seriously, this was inspired by seeing several English dudes complain about Americans spellings and ...

In fiction writing, there is a saying that is "show, don't tell." The same saying can be said for poetry. ;) Right now, this is a list poem that just ...

I read what was in Dreamy's entry and liked it. Tell us when this gets published! :D

Ooooh... I liked this. I liked the beginning, but it didn't really fit. So I would delete this: A lot of stories are told by people who are smart, or ...

DUDE! Totally groovy! I love the flower background. And I think you should stick with lineless drawings now. This is one of your best pieces (so far). ;)