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Hahaha, he is ugly. The only thing I think is weird is the angle... either were looking at him from the top or his is abnormally squashed. O_o

LOL! Yes, more colors would be nice. But I must say, you are very very dedicated to your story. :D

Hmmm... you spelled it right before, since you're an American. For us, it's "skeptical." ;) Anyway... I liked how you described how his eyes had an effect on the narrator, ...

Yeah, YWS doesn't have paragraph indents. Instead, put spaces in between each of your paragraphs. It's much more readable that way. ^_^ First of all, what I liked! I liked ...

P.S. Who the heck is Pat Buchanan? He's on all the polls! Pat Buchanan is like SPEW. He may or may not exist, but it doesn't really matter which way ...

...well, maybe for my birthday, he can add them? ;) EDIT: If you do have purple stars, maybe you can make it so that it takes 150 reviews to get ...

...worship what?

Hehehe, you're much improved than you were when I last critiqued you. In fact, I was kind of stunned by the improvement... you wouldn't think that much improvement in that ...

Ooh, I love this! Of course, I'm going to love anything that involves stars or sticky notes or stickers in general. Wow, I'm so mature. :roll: And I bet Nate ...

NO TWINS! :o

Very!

Why didn't I see this before? :P Oh well! As usual, I love your stuff and they make me feel very happy. With that said, I shall rip apart this ...

Yes! YWS allows you to advertize your website in a nice convenient place anyone can see! Add your website up. ;)

Ah! It's tied again. More help?

Nah, the word is treble.