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That's it. When I become a best selling author, I am soooo going to get that house.

The brain is a very strange thing indeed? I wouldn't try it and I would want more research on it before it gets released in the public. O_o

LOL! For FREAK, I remember telling a story in present tense, just to liven things up. So a character who wasn't very grammatically correct just ranted in first person/present tense. ...

Um... it's tied. Help?

*hands kitten* You deserve it! :D

Ay de mi! Pesky little errors... well, I fixed it. Hopefully it reads better now? ;)

Thanks for all your comments, they were all extremely helpful! I edited the piece slightly... feel free to comment more if you want. :) And this is it. This story ...

She peeked into the room. “May I come in?” “Certainly.” For a moment, she didn’t believe him. He could tell because her eyes became squinty and she looked him over ...

Ash Ketchum Age: 14 Build: Slender Profession: Pokemon addict Background: He was the world's greatest Poke master when a horrible accident happened and he caught on fire and now looks ...

Hehe! :D Adverbs weaken a sentence by emphasizing the adverb rather than the other words. Sometimes that's good. A well-placed adverb can beat any other description anyday. Other times, it's ...

Well... for the camera picture, the camera looks a little blurred. So that's why it doesn't do anything for me, really. If it were more clear, that would be a ...

I have not read the rest of the story (bad me) so forgive me if this isn't really in depth since I don't want to read something Critical that gets ...

Wow... a psychedelic poem about mushrooms. Who would have thought? It was a lovely nonsense poem. You should be bored more often. Small nitpics: And the [should be their] stems ...

Where were these taken? The first one is definitely the best... my sister asked if they were real since it looked so surreal. Beautiful stuff. :D

Which one do you like better? Mickey Mouse or Bugs Bunny? Why?