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Awww.... we love poetry! And stories... you should complete your novels so we can read them. :D Welcome to YWS!

Hahaha.. I know about it, but the little red marks it makes on Word makes me want to edit it more. :P Thanks for the tip anyway!

I liked it, but you need to fix the typos. ;) A mysterious and magical cretaure [should be creature], comes to us in dreams and stories always eluding us. Breating ...

It looks like this is a joke that was lengthened into a full short story. Unfortunately, I don't think you have transcribed it properly. For example, when you tell the ...

XD Wow... that's nice adaptation. :D

Thank you for all your very excellent comments! They were very insightful and hopefully I'll be able to follow them. ;) Mad>> Ay! Someone else pointed out the forced rhyming ...

What about Kyle Jr.? Didn't he have something to do with the end? ;)

Eh... he's asking for critiques, so it would be better in Other. ;)

Oh Love, my Lord, be brave Ignore the world’s cry Go quickly to thy grave How could you, a man, crave To face death eye-to-eye…? Oh Love, my Lord, be ...

I would say that having a comletely evil character is impossible. The gut-wrenching feeling comes, not by the character acting evil but rather you recognizing that you would have done ...

Hooray! They're going home! Whales lost in Calif. river making progress again toward Pacific By Marcus Wohlsen ASSOCIATED PRESS 11:42 a.m. May 29, 2007 VALLEJO – Two whales lost between ...

Ahhh... Well, I know "Speak" by Laurie Halse Anderson has to do with rape of minors... and it's a pretty good book. ;)

You already have a post just like this in the lounge. *Locked*

What kind of genre would you like?

Any poem fits into other poetry. That's the beauty of it. ;) Okay! So the poem! I thought it would be better fit as dialogue or somewhere else in a ...