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Mmmm... it's in a very old-fashioned style that I'm not really a fan of (it's not your fault, really), so I won't waste your time talking about that, letting one ...

Heheh, I see what you mean. ;) The main thing about this is it looks like a morality poem, complete with a message and unafraid of screwing the message into ...

*Locked*

This?

Unless infinity could be defined. ;) (Um... we love theory?)

Thanks for all the comments! Okay... all of you bring up good points. It's too detached or impersonal for it to really draw a reader in and too specific for ...

Hehehe... just as long as you have tact. ;)

*Moved to the Lounge*

I now intend to write a story entirely in netspeak. It'll be interesting to see which critiquer attempts to kill me first. ^_^ Hahaha, I wanted to do that too, ...

It's a little bit too elongated in the middle, and that's what makes it look a little weird. And it needs a slightly longer neck and more slender features, since ...

I might have to take up your challenge. ;)

∫F•ds is the definition of Work, which is force through a distance. :D Yes. Boo to physics. I think I'll show my physics teacher this poem tomorrow. He'll love it... ...

Oh my... it looks like I'm going to have a boy?

Well, don't think of this as in the real space. I use R2 and R3 so that it can be imagined, but it could also be used for other dimensions ...

Oh my. You have definitely improved last I've seen, and... that's saying something.